This is an invitation to all of you poets (or potential poets, which is all of you) out there to join me in a new collaborative series I’m calling “Get Your Golden Shovel”. Here is how it works.
Each Saturday in February (as an initial experiment and then I’ll decide whether to continue), will be Golden Shovel Saturday. I’ll post a prompt consisting of one or two lines from a well known poem on Saturday, then we all will create a new poem using the Golden Shovel form and share it with each other. I think it will be very interesting to see how different each of our pieces are despite pulling from the same source of material.
What is the Golden Shovel form, you ask? The Golden Shovel form was created by the poet Terrance Hayes, whose poem “Golden Shovel” (from his 2010 collection Lighthead) is based on Gwendolyn Brooks’ “We Real Cool” which references the phrase “Golden Shovel”. Check out the “rules” here. There is also an example provided.
If you missed the first prompt, check out all the contributions from the community in the Week 1 Round-Up. Feel free to contribute yours anytime. It was a great poem line prompt with lots of creative potential.
Enough said. Here’s our second prompt. Enjoy!
Golden Shovel No. 02
“Cocoa in pods and alligator pears”
The Tropics in New York by Claude McKay
You can either post on your own blog and link to the prompt post so that we can all see it and further share, include it in the prompt post’s comments section, or post on twitter and tag me (@montyvern).
While there is not any hard deadline, the intention is to share your Golden Shovel poem during the prompt week before the following Golden Shovel Saturday. I’ll target posting my own poem along with some of yours with links in a round-up post ahead of the following week’s prompt.
That’s it! I’m looking forward to seeing what we all come up. It should be a bit challenging, but hopefully fun.
Be well,
Monty

- Salting the EarthSalting the Earth Torrents of tears flow down streaky cheeked hillsPuddling into overflowing pools under footSalting the earth barrenStripping soil of it’s soulHis body nowContinue reading “Salting the Earth”
- Portrait in BlueBe well, Monty
- Under the Earth’s ShadowI lay awake under the earth’s shadowGentle breathing curled at my feetA companion in this darknessHolding guard against The cold reality and coming lightFor I’mContinue reading “Under the Earth’s Shadow”
- Blue HeronBe well, Monty
- Endure MeEndure meEndure my cold feet under the sheetsEndure my rough breaths sawing through the night’s airMy tossing and turningMy hogging all the blanketsMy nightmare kicksMyContinue reading “Endure Me”
I’m gonna follow the rules on this one lol
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Haha!
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“Cocoa in pods and alligator pears?” WTF were you thinking? Clearly – you were not. How do you come up with these? Is it random?
I will try to create something for my Thursday post, but this is tough. I have ‘interface’ as another prompt waiting for me… It’s going to be a challenging week.
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Haha. Well this is a real line from a real poem, but I’m selecting them based on my personal attraction to the words. I’ve already done mine for this line and I loved it 🤷♂️. Sorry if I’m stretching it too far on only the second week. Haha.
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I make it a point not to read other entries (yours) before I write mine. I don’t want to be too influenced – I like how unique yet sometimes the same the entries are.
I like being pushed. Let’s see what comes of it.
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Agree. I don’t post mine for the line till the end of the week for the round-up post for exactly that reason.
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Delicious! Cocoa
Seduced from pods
And finding
Tongues
Of alligator
Under the shack
Where
Massages mysteriously happen
In zihua
Like sweet whispers
Of pears.
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Beautifully Fun!
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