Waterfalls into Pools of Blue

Since it’s poetry month, I thought I would try out some new forms and I this idea popped into my head. I think it would qualify as concrete poetry, but welcome anyone to suggest if there is a better description.

What do you think?

Be well,



  1. murisopsis says:

    This one absolutely is a concrete poem!! Thee are so many ways that you could have gone – makes me want to give a concrete poem a try!! (I haven’t written on is so long…)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Monty Vern says:

      Ok, cool. I wasn’t sure if I was taking it too far into the illustration realm. Either way is good, but wasn’t sure on the classification. Thanks for the feedback and regular visits!


  2. aguycalledbloke says:

    Very good, do you think the colour of the pools would have looked good as purple?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Monty Vern says:

      Probably — if I wanted to rhyme with purple that would be a good idea.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. aguycalledbloke says:

        No l measnt purely for the colour of the pools to be purple to introduce an abstract aspect.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Monty Vern says:

        Ah! Ok. I’ll play around with that idea. Thanks!

        Liked by 1 person

      3. aguycalledbloke says:

        Ignore me Monty l just see things at times differently especially visually 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      4. Monty Vern says:

        Different is good! I did think of introducing some color variation into the image but I wasn’t sure in what way. I’m happy to have the suggestion!

        Liked by 1 person

      5. aguycalledbloke says:


        Liked by 1 person

  3. I love the graphic!!! Woooowwww so cool!


    1. Monty Vern says:

      Thanks so much! I had this image building in my mind yesterday and was very happy to get it out so my mind would rest…haha. I think It came out pretty much like my brain was thinking.


Leave a Comment

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s