This is the first time I’m learning this terminology. I like the idea of appealing multi-sensorially through choice of words.
One More Move
His shadow loomed loudly over her; his eyes bitter black; exposed skin saggy and dank; breath puckered yellow; tongue lashing sharply.
She stood still; a silent protest of galvanized grey; icy tears drowning her fear; eyes burning cold, daring him to make just one more move.
I liked this technique. Certainly I’ve used it before but never so intentionally.
Nice piece! I’ve often wondered what it would be like to experience synesthesia. The S pattern is interesting. You really have me looking at letters differently, and that’s always fun.