Shine On


Shine on, shine on, shine on me
Shine your light on me
Light me up, cast away my doubts
Lift me out of these shadows
I’m ready, I’m ready, please shine your light on me.


Be well,

Monty


6 Comments

  1. murisopsis's avatar murisopsis says:

    Ah! This poem is exactly the conundrum – we want the attention, we beg for it and then when we get it we become shy!

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    1. Monty Vern's avatar Monty Vern says:

      Haha. I wasn’t thinking of it that way but I see what you mean!

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  2. Kathleen's avatar Kathleen says:

    Shine on, you!

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  3. gigglingfattie's avatar gigglingfattie says:

    The first line reminds me of a Christian worship song I used to sing at church haha

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    1. Monty Vern's avatar Monty Vern says:

      When I wrote it I felt I might be copying from something I heard or saw in a movie or something.

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      1. gigglingfattie's avatar gigglingfattie says:

        Haha just a memory for me, not a copying!

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